1. Start with the unaltered photo.There you have it. Once again, I ask--does this work?
1. Start with the unaltered photo.









This pose is not bad at all. I instructed Gwen not to be afraid to gesture with both hands, suggesting the gesture might be improved by extending the other hand, with a down-pointing wrist.
A good start to the seated poses, quite demure and girlish--the head cocked to one side would be a more feminine look.
I like this. I suggested that Gwen should keep her feet tight together as she swings them to the side.
This is more like it...but I'd have preferred to see that hand outstretched or behind her head or something.
This one is okay, but just okay. It would be far more femme with the knees pulled closer to the body. I told her to look over my own "curled up on the floor" photos for examples.
This one is just terrific! It has a shyness, a coyness, to it that is very femme.















